Abracadabra: New Form Revised

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*Image of Abracadabra by Gifer. Abracadabra: New Form REVISED I have cast a spell o'er thee, wicked one, Owning, demon clings to our heart and soul, Tis our love, our hope, together, we're free, We were young, our life of good hath begun, Yet thou took thee o'er and away from thee, Though act's thoust do, sayeth father to son, Retaliate -- thy consequence thoust cope, Set thy ship and sail, begone, for thoust won, Alas, bonds freed, flit darkness lost control, Together, we're free, tis our love, our hope, Thy shine gloweth, giveth reason for Sun. 2022 August 16 HMS; 10 syllabic format, only. Rhyme Scheme; a,b,R-c,a,c,a,d,a,b,R-d,a Example lines R-c/R-d (xxxxdzzzzc)<->(zzzzcxxxxd) *singular line internal reversal creates dual rhyming lines List of whole lines Rhyming Reversal concepts I recently wrote: "Rumi Nuff for Us" "In JULY: Small Begins Mightily" "The Wake of my Village"

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/16/2022 6:51:00 PM

The video is just wonderful and your verse heart warming. Bonds freed, flit darkness lost control, Together, we're free, tis our love, our hope, Thy shine gloweth, giveth reason for Sun.Many Blessings to you and yours

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/16/2022 11:28:00 PM

Twas Mickey's Fantasia or this, so I sided with slapstick video, glad you liked it on the whole, Eve, blessings my friend, Aloha~William