Abracadabra: New Form Revised
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Abracadabra: New Form REVISED
I have cast a spell o'er thee, wicked one,
Owning, demon clings to our heart and soul,
Tis our love, our hope, together, we're free,
We were young, our life of good hath begun,
Yet thou took thee o'er and away from thee,
Though act's thoust do, sayeth father to son,
Retaliate -- thy consequence thoust cope,
Set thy ship and sail, begone, for thoust won,
Alas, bonds freed, flit darkness lost control,
Together, we're free, tis our love, our hope,
Thy shine gloweth, giveth reason for Sun.
2022 August 16
HMS; 10 syllabic format, only.
Rhyme Scheme; a,b,R-c,a,c,a,d,a,b,R-d,a
Example lines R-c/R-d (xxxxdzzzzc)<->(zzzzcxxxxd)
*singular line internal reversal creates dual rhyming lines
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