Above the Silence

she came in like the wind a brush of freedom blowing across my, too soon, greying hair I stood still taking in each breath she gave not willing/wanting to exhale
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Chircop Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 1:07 PM
Very romantic.
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October 13, 2020 at 3:10 PM
https://youtu.be/c5ORy8jyDpc
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October 13, 2020 at 3:27 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/tease_for_two_1193141
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October 13, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Trouble, with a capital "T"...
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October 13, 2020 at 3:20 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/drowning_spectacularly_in_deep_pools_of_words_1248040
Labyrinth Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 3:13 PM
"Day by day Watched you wandering through the streets Smiling through the window shield How you doing today? Are you sitting in the mad man's hands again? I want you to know You ain't alone" x
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October 13, 2020 at 3:11 PM
https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/patrickwatson/goodmorningmrwolf.html
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 3:05 PM
oooh TS dont tell me about your greying hair i find it sooooooo attractive in men lol:-) seriously good poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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