Above the Me

Above the ME
beneath
the 
yOU

Admit the oh! 
so TRUE

Mind the              Mine
Floor the                    your
Well a liquid want and pour!

Between the means; never seems
To fill their needs (enough);

A lot be                LOUD
Amidst them         most: time and daze and trough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 4/7/2011 10:27:00 AM
Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Michele. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:52:00 PM
Michele, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on all three of your poems making it into the semi finals Michele. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round! Good Luck!~Trudy~
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured numerous times this week..Great work, GB Always Tyesha
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:55:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week, several times. I love the format on this piece. Awesome. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:09:00 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:34:00 AM
I've read most of your poetry and liked it very much, but you'll have to fill me in on this one. Love, daver
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Date: 3/25/2009 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations, Michele!! (also my daughter's name:) !! ) Three poems featured ...hooray for you! ~ lovely work...Carrie
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. What can I say you rock this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured! Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:07:00 AM
Congrats on your double feature! Love, shar
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