Above the Me

Above the ME
beneath
the 
yOU

Admit the oh! 
so TRUE

Mind the              Mine
Floor the                    your
Well a liquid want and pour!

Between the means; never seems
To fill their needs (enough);

A lot be                LOUD
Amidst them         most: time and daze and trough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Stopping in to read some of your excellent poetry today Michele. Hope to stop back again soon and read some more. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2009 at 6:52 PM
Michele, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Brown Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on all three of your poems making it into the semi finals Michele. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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March 31, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round! Good Luck!~Trudy~
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March 29, 2009 at 12:20 AM
Congratulations on being featured numerous times this week..Great work, GB Always Tyesha
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March 27, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week, several times. I love the format on this piece. Awesome. Smiles from Lolita
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March 27, 2009 at 3:09 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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March 26, 2009 at 7:34 AM
I've read most of your poetry and liked it very much, but you'll have to fill me in on this one. Love, daver
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March 25, 2009 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations, Michele!! (also my daughter's name:) !! ) Three poems featured ...hooray for you! ~ lovely work...Carrie
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. What can I say you rock this week. Love, Carol
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March 25, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on being featured! Kirstie
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March 23, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Congrats on your double feature! Love, shar
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