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Above the Broad

Jean Claude was staring at me Hmmm
from the balcony. Oggling all he could
peeking at the girls; posing with aplomb.
He raised an eyebrow. I thought, should
I raised the anti, laughed, jiggled some
and got a rise, I well understood
Jean Claude was staring at me Hmmm.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2014

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Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 10/28/2014 7:49:00 PM So sweet and picturesque. You've created a unique aura and image. Hmmmm love it! Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/28/2014 7:32:00 PM I really enjoyed this one, pretty loosy goosy for you Debbie although I have noticed your abilities are boundless and your repetoire infinite. Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 10/23/2014 2:13:00 PM :D This is very good, Debbie. I was smiling at Jean Claude's interest and the way you flirted back with a laugh and a jiggle. Good luck in the contest and thanks for your comments. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/23/2014 7:21:00 AM I guess in this case he could be considered a rising star. This was very entertaining Debbie. Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/21/2014 5:54:00 PM Jean Claude was staring at you Hmmm, I hope you got his number. Good luck in the contest Debbie. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/21/2014 5:35:00 PM Hmmm.Very sweet and entertaining : ) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/21/2014 4:59:00 PM Made me smile Debbie:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply