Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

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Above the Broad

Jean Claude was staring at me Hmmm
from the balcony. Oggling all he could
peeking at the girls; posing with aplomb.
He raised an eyebrow. I thought, should
I raised the anti, laughed, jiggled some
and got a rise, I well understood
Jean Claude was staring at me Hmmm.

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Suzanne C. Goudreau October 28, 2014 at 7:49 PM So sweet and picturesque. You've created a unique aura and image. Hmmmm love it!

Maurice Yvonne October 28, 2014 at 7:32 PM I really enjoyed this one, pretty loosy goosy for you Debbie although I have noticed your abilities are boundless and your repetoire infinite.

Diane Locksley October 23, 2014 at 2:13 PM :D This is very good, Debbie. I was smiling at Jean Claude's interest and the way you flirted back with a laugh and a jiggle. Good luck in the contest and thanks for your comments.

Richard Lamoureux October 23, 2014 at 7:21 AM I guess in this case he could be considered a rising star. This was very entertaining Debbie.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 21, 2014 at 5:54 PM Jean Claude was staring at you Hmmm, I hope you got his number. Good luck in the contest Debbie.

Charmaine Chircop October 21, 2014 at 5:35 PM Hmmm.Very sweet and entertaining : )

Jan Allison October 21, 2014 at 4:59 PM Made me smile Debbie:-) Hugs jan xxx