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Jean Claude was staring at me Hmmm from the balcony. Oggling all he could peeking at the girls; posing with aplomb. He raised an eyebrow. I thought, should I raised the anti, laughed, jiggled some and got a rise, I well understood Jean Claude was staring at me Hmmm.

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Date: 10/28/2014 7:49:00 PM
So sweet and picturesque. You've created a unique aura and image. Hmmmm love it!
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one, pretty loosy goosy for you Debbie although I have noticed your abilities are boundless and your repetoire infinite.
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Date: 10/23/2014 2:13:00 PM
:D This is very good, Debbie. I was smiling at Jean Claude's interest and the way you flirted back with a laugh and a jiggle. Good luck in the contest and thanks for your comments.
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Date: 10/23/2014 7:21:00 AM
I guess in this case he could be considered a rising star. This was very entertaining Debbie.
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Date: 10/21/2014 5:54:00 PM
Jean Claude was staring at you Hmmm, I hope you got his number. Good luck in the contest Debbie.
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Date: 10/21/2014 5:35:00 PM
Hmmm.Very sweet and entertaining : )
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Date: 10/21/2014 4:59:00 PM
Made me smile Debbie:-) Hugs jan xxx
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