Dilinda A. Adams Poet Sonnet

Above All You Loved, Heaven Is Above--Seventh Shadow Sonnet Challenge

~~Above All You Loved, Heaven is Above~~

Man made in the image of God, pray man
Woman, a rib of man your love woman
Can your love plan every thought, if you can?
Humans can pray for the lives of humans

Prime vigor, your heart felt life in your prime
Compassion understands, sweet compassion
Time ends days, life is wanting every time
Passions warm affection, loving passions

Life is living right, do you live like life?
Pride's deadly sins; love was not ever pride
Strife disputes harmony; bitter is strife
Brides don't cry, you're a rare most lovely brides

Love your man it's his life; you are his love 
Above all you loved, heaven is above. 

© 2015 DiLinda A. Adams, All Rights Reserved.

Seventh Shadow Sonnet Challenge! – Please join me. Poems should rhyme, and have an 10 syllable count and 14 lines to meet the challenge. However, if you just want to be creative please do so.

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Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2015 at 12:02 PM DiLinda:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Always ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2015 at 12:27 AM DiLinda, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA Dilinda A. Adams March 16, 2015 at 12:59 PM Thank you Linda, that was nice of you to say such warm and kind words. Shalom.

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 4:47 PM DILINDA:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~ Dilinda A. Adams March 16, 2015 at 1:01 PM Thank you Skat, for your dear comment and taking the time to read. I am new here and I am just learning my way around. Shalom.

Poet Destroyer A February 28, 2015 at 8:55 PM Dilinda, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@ Dilinda A. Adams March 2, 2015 at 1:00 AM Thank you for such a kind welcom. Their is so much information I am still trying to find my way aroun. I love to read and learn new things. I will check out your contes, that sounds like fun. Thank you for reading.

Skat A February 27, 2015 at 9:48 PM DiLinda, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Dilinda A. Adams March 2, 2015 at 1:07 AM Thank you Skat for the warm welcome, it seems like a nice place to be. The welcomes have been very warm and I can't wait to learn the writing styles of others. Thank you for reading.