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Above a Stream

As I float above a stream in blue sky I watch images and hear whisper below Shattered thoughts in reflections going by Our love is sinking in the water flow My fragile heart does break As my new smiles turn fake The tears are now awake Dreadful thoughts surge As we submerge Let us converge So I plead for you to understand why To accept there are things you do not know Trust in the direction the stream does take Let love not purge Heidi Sands 5/23/18 Placed 2nd in the puzzle of my rhyme contest. Theme: Above A Stream Words required: Blue, Whisper, Shattered, Fragile, Dreadful.

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Date: 6/25/2018 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done. Your imagery took me along with you.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2018 6:35:00 PM
That is great to hear Susan. Thank you :)
Date: 6/24/2018 7:00:00 AM
Heidi, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive write, well done ~
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you very much BW! :)
Date: 6/23/2018 4:08:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 6/23/2018 11:39:00 AM
Heidi, congrats on your win for this beautifully written sad poem. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thank you John :)
Date: 5/24/2018 4:09:00 PM
Very well done--excellent depiction..hope you win BIG.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 5:18:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay :)
Date: 5/24/2018 1:16:00 PM
Very well-written--so sad! Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Janice. :)
Date: 5/24/2018 1:15:00 PM
Well penned Heidi...best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. It was a challenge :)

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