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Fields of the dermis yield a harvest worthy of an ample supply of suppleness, Foretelling fluctuating skin moisturizing balms that saturates the aged cavities, Cherished heydays occupied a magnificent face for cameras to envy, In the advance of time, I am content to tender the waning years. 2020 January 14

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Date: 1/14/2020 10:51:00 AM
Deep write, William , good luck in the contest.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/14/2020 10:57:00 AM
Thank you, my faithful poetess~@wk
Date: 1/14/2020 10:40:00 AM
I am very certain Greg will appreciate this excerpt William. I think it is brilliant! We all must face that time will change us, but some grow more handsome with time. xxoo
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:55:00 AM
Lol, and don't forget pretty too-Mahalo Connie!~@wk

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