Jay Loveless Poet Free verse

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Why are you always changing
without a map to be found
complicating things
my faith falls down
my comments inbox has up and dissapeared
now I must look through every poem
If your words I wish to hear
Why not just make it prettier,
With bold colors and nice font
Instead you mess with something I've been using
Since I was a child,
Its really frustrating me,
And I wonder if I should stay,
Or like my comments inbox just up and go away.

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Jslambert Mister Roboto July 25, 2014 at 1:10 PM this one is cool. I am glad u hung around. I have split up with the soup several times. but like a dog to vomit. I return every gottt damn time. I am still looking for the Dyslexia poem about your dad.

Leonard Taormina November 8, 2012 at 12:56 AM Wow finally someone that feels like I do about the comment box and that oh so needed support that comes with it. Truth be told I also struggle with the same consideration of tossing it all away.

Poet Destroyer A October 23, 2012 at 11:32 AM interesting thoughts, about the soup.... it can be frustrating... thank you for sharing... always..pd

Justin Bordner October 3, 2012 at 1:18 PM Take it easy Jay! We need you! I am alarmed by your comment on my poem, Mercy From The Memory Of Multitudes vanishing???? I cherrish your comments and spirit - if you did not deliberately remove it from my page I would appreciate you recommenting on the piece - I love your impulse - 'faith falls' is sensational - your nervous friend - J.A.B. %