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About My Dad

Like a Shepherd to its sheep; Like a Bee-hive to its bee; Your arms protects me; From Dangers I don't even see; And I Ponder; How nice to have my father; Your Words of wisdom; like swords of a Kingdom; Pierce through my heart; And kills my state of confusion; Still, I Ponder; How good to have my Father; When my Stubborn me; Engulfs my Normal me; You Prune down my wings; And put me in place; Yet I Ponder; How nice to have my Father; And I will try and try and try; To make you Smile and smile and smile; And would say it louder; How nice to have my Father!;

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Date: 9/26/2013 2:52:00 AM
nice one... d place of a father....hmmn
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:33:00 AM
Powerful, touching & electrifying. Those lines runs deep. Love it. You can also comment on mine anytime. -Sir Ginger Amee terdue-
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Onyedika Chineke
Date: 9/25/2013 6:34:00 AM
Merci
Date: 9/22/2013 7:10:00 PM
A very deep poem Onyedika, , Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~ Linda
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Onyedika Chineke
Date: 9/23/2013 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, but its no more listed :(
Date: 8/25/2013 3:12:00 AM
Such a heart touching poem.. Loved it :) And thanks for going through my work, and commenting on it! means a lot :)
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Onyedika Chineke
Date: 8/25/2013 3:28:00 AM
Thanks... U are welcome

Book: Shattered Sighs