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About Lust

When libido burns, bones and flesh melts into a warm pool of delight. Date: 07/29/2017

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/30/2022 7:37:00 AM

Love the passionate spark of your Monoku. Congratulations! Brian

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2022 9:57:00 AM

Thank You

Silent One

Date: 9/23/2017 5:21:00 AM

Great one liner... very sensual

Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/27/2017 11:13:00 PM

Thank you S.O.

Maria Williams

Date: 8/5/2017 8:53:00 AM

I really like the sound of this, when libido burns, excellent Afzal...Maria

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/5/2017 12:20:00 PM

Thank you, Maria.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/1/2017 7:57:00 AM

You said so much with such few words.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/1/2017 10:35:00 PM

Thank you.

Silent One

Date: 7/31/2017 7:30:00 AM

Excelelnt one liner..

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/31/2017 11:55:00 PM

Thank you.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/31/2017 4:39:00 AM

A warm pool of delight Afzal...but unfortunately we did not make the winners list...next time my friend lol...god bless...^WW^

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/31/2017 11:56:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement, W.W.

Joseph May

Date: 7/30/2017 12:58:00 PM

Very nicely done Afzal, I'm surprised it didn't make the list

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/30/2017 1:46:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/29/2017 10:57:00 PM

I thought I read this before, Afzal, the imagery is well done. :) ~*

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/29/2017 11:17:00 PM

Yeah I know, I reposted it 'cause I didn't like the N/A.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2017 7:11:00 PM

I think you did a great job with your imagery here, Afzal. Too bad we did not make the winners' list!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/29/2017 11:15:00 PM

I was shocked for both of us but thanks for the kind comment, Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2017 12:07:00 PM

I like, I like! A great entry Afzal! : )

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/29/2017 2:59:00 PM

Thanks, Connie.