About Lust

When libido burns, bones and flesh melts into a warm pool of delight.


Date: 07/29/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sambourne Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Love the passionate spark of your Monoku. Congratulations! Brian
Nusker Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Thank You
One Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:21 AM
Great one liner... very sensual
Nusker Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:13 PM
Thank you S.O.
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 8:53 AM
I really like the sound of this, when libido burns, excellent Afzal...Maria
Nusker Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thank you, Maria.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 7:57 AM
You said so much with such few words.
Nusker Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 10:35 PM
Thank you.
One Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Excelelnt one liner..
Nusker Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 11:55 PM
Thank you.
Warrior Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 4:39 AM
A warm pool of delight Afzal...but unfortunately we did not make the winners list...next time my friend lol...god bless...^WW^
Nusker Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 11:56 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, W.W.
May Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 12:58 PM
Very nicely done Afzal, I'm surprised it didn't make the list
Nusker Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Roper Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 10:57 PM
I thought I read this before, Afzal, the imagery is well done. :) ~*
Nusker Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 11:17 PM
Yeah I know, I reposted it 'cause I didn't like the N/A.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 7:11 PM
I think you did a great job with your imagery here, Afzal. Too bad we did not make the winners' list!
Nusker Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 11:15 PM
I was shocked for both of us but thanks for the kind comment, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 12:07 PM
I like, I like! A great entry Afzal! : )
Nusker Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 2:59 PM
Thanks, Connie.
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