About Last Night

The cool touch of the blowing wind
Set us on fire!
Drawing us nearer;
Closer together.
We were a slave
To the rhythm of the water,
As it touches the beach.
Unable to resist!
In a trance,to the hypnotic
Feeling of love's command;
Wishing it to be everlasting!
Like the burning sensations
We have shared
A while ago
On the sand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 9, 2013 at 7:39 PM
AWESOME DEAN.............SKAT
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August 8, 2013 at 9:45 PM
Dean, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... xox Linda
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August 8, 2013 at 8:30 PM
awesome Nate
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June 25, 2013 at 10:38 AM
The Passion of Youth regaled in Love; a potion of extreme happiness or extreme despair. Your poems express both. Life will tell your tale and how it is written is up to you. Enjoy reading your perspectives and the metaphors express well your meanings. Allan
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