Aborted Rights Remain Valid Facts To Speak Up

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unrhymed tercets under the trinity of homegrown truth

Attempts to cull the human unborn have caused mass controversy despite the widespread damage this can cause to the population under stable growth moving forward killing the weaker of our group Whom are unable to defend themselves from this violent abuse system ever originating crushing morals branded as an inferior being Devaluing it's space of origin with these loveless acts of aggression towards another comes these deeply engraved remarks twisting truth turns venom and drinks from the souls of those innocent bodies Sacrificed as something rejected unworthy of love murdered not being up to standard classified worthless challenges the political role as lawless agendas creep The wide scale damage this causes on society at large it mounts up to an industry with inbuilt uncertainty revisits our future as the signs of chaos condemning basic rights to death

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/12/2018 1:30:00 AM

That Ireland is coming out of the dark ages is a good thing not bad, the only change is young women dont have to travel to the UK to save their lives. I find it funny that with 1.2 billion children demanding love and food and not being abused, no one has addressed that yet. When people focus on love and humanity rather than backwards morality, the world wont be perfect but a better place.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 6/12/2018 3:35:00 AM

sacrifice is the dark ages more like it under real terms crushing babies heads ripping them to pieces you say over a billion children are demanding love that they wish to be aborted and ripped limb to limb i am addressing the evil here as we speak the world is a septic tank of evil where the blind have a new morality kill kill kill you stand in favour of the culture of death tells me everything about your deeply ingrained compassion

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/11/2018 8:58:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! Very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very heartfelt! So true! The world is all upside down as we know.It breaks my heart to see all the horrible sad, evil things, happening everywhere.All signs of the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray to God now more than ever before,for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^