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Ablaze Win

My best girlfriend Used all her efforts for you Begged humbly fate Nourished her thirsty hearts Sailed before wind then, won you.

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James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 6/18/2017 8:10:00 AM

Incredible !!! Liken told as a short novel Nothing short but probable reality weather fiction or nonfiction in the verse. There's Hope instilled in the probable reality great works thank you for your works. Wonderful ---James Edward Lee Sr

Pintu Chandra Deb
Date: 6/18/2017 2:11:00 PM

You welcome for inspiring comment. Thank you so much.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 6/18/2017 7:47:00 AM

Very nice, sounds like a loved won not lost. To me a positive verse happiness ever after ---James Edward Lee Sr

Pintu Chandra Deb
Date: 6/18/2017 2:14:00 PM

Yeah, positive verse. Thank you very much for good comment on my poem. It's my great achievement.