Abiding Drive To Win

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As one pushes harder and bettor, an abating sense might resolve. Birds shout in manners other than uproarious yells while rising When time is short, aplomb is a conundrum to evolve. Should profoundly breathe out, for negative cogency sparing. Written: August 15, 2021 1st Place winner A Brian Strand 3 To 14 Line Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/16/2021 11:32:00 AM

Hello Lasaad, busy reading your work. I am always falling behind....We all love to win but it's important to lose with grace...Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 12:32:00 PM

Thank you very much, Delice, for your delightful comment, You feel free to read, but your feedback is important. Blessings my, friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/15/2021 12:42:00 PM

A very thought provoking verse Lasaad, I think its in us all, that drive to win. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/15/2021 2:21:00 PM

You're right, Tom; everyone has a desire to win, but how they go about it is the essential factor. Thank you very much for your kind words. Tom, I hope you have a wonderful weekend.