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Abiding

Akin to a brook

     Babbling without an end, the... 

          Inexhaustible curiosities of children,

               Darling, as long as there is heaven above,

          I'll love you true, as long as you stay;

     Now, tomorrow, forever and a day;

God is my witness!



A Forms And Words Challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Sotto Poet
Word choice: Abiding (Acrostic)
Date written: 02/25/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Marvelous Edward. The form is perfect for the sentiment. Congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Again, I enjoyed your write/picture.  Have a wonderful day......................
Poet Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Edward, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge. I like your picture and quote as well. Blessings.
Ibeh Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, congrats and my placement, Lasaad:-) Most obliged.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Love your write. It would make a great card. Your picture/saying is wonderful/true. Have a blessed weekend............
Ibeh Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and feedback, Paula:-)
Pandit Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 6:16 AM
Succinct, beautiful poem. Loved the opening lines.
Ibeh Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Thank you very much as always, Vijay:-) God bless.
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