Abiding

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Akin to a brook Babbling without an end, the... Inexhaustible curiosities of children, Darling, as long as there is heaven above, I'll love you true, as long as you stay; Now, tomorrow, forever and a day; God is my witness! A Forms And Words Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet Word choice: Abiding (Acrostic) Date written: 02/25/2023

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/4/2023 7:01:00 AM

Marvelous Edward. The form is perfect for the sentiment. Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/3/2023 8:08:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. Again, I enjoyed your write/picture. Have a wonderful day......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/2/2023 10:11:00 AM

Edward, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge. I like your picture and quote as well. Blessings.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/2/2023 8:11:00 PM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, congrats and my placement, Lasaad:-) Most obliged.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2023 2:00:00 PM

Love your write. It would make a great card. Your picture/saying is wonderful/true. Have a blessed weekend............

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 6:02:00 PM

Thank you so much for the visit and feedback, Paula:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/25/2023 6:16:00 AM

Succinct, beautiful poem. Loved the opening lines.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 6:36:00 AM

Thank you very much as always, Vijay:-) God bless.