John Freeman Poet Limerick

Abide of Love Tide

Enticed of love’s glove on sandy beach
Enhanced of love two lover’s beseech
~Sand between the toes
~Graceful love thus glows
Love’s advice in the wind…they seek each!
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As ripple tide to the moon has not lied
By two lover's bide, two soul wills confide 
~Amidst suds of salt 
~Soul loves finds not fault
Like water the bride flows in the groom’s pride
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From beginning dawn of celestial blue
True love’s marriage, clever, is never through
~Two lover’s sweet stroll
~Twilight’s blue is gold
Love’s current, no deterrent, pitching woo 
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Written by John Moses Freeman
For and in honor of Linda Marie
And contest:

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Dr Hitendra Mehta April 12, 2011 at 4:48 AM Many congrats John on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this multiple romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet April 11, 2011 at 12:55 PM Your a joy to read John.Congrats on this 3rd.place win.Oh loved this one.Thanks for the kind congrats on my win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Caryl Muzzey April 11, 2011 at 9:09 AM Congratulations on your third place win with this wonderful limerick. I enjoyed reading this cleaver write. Caryl

Harry Horsman April 11, 2011 at 6:12 AM excellent John, love this, Harry

Black Eyed Susan April 11, 2011 at 5:12 AM Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 11, 2011 at 4:39 AM Congratulations on your win Moses in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan April 10, 2011 at 10:57 PM As ripple tide to the moon has not lied So beautiful and romantic, John. Many congrats dear friend.

Nette Onclaud April 10, 2011 at 7:54 PM divine, john!! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette

Brian Magness April 10, 2011 at 7:45 PM Congratulations, John on your third place win!! Brian

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2011 at 2:15 PM I just knew this one would do well, john. Congratulations to you.

Jack Horne April 10, 2011 at 11:08 AM Many congratulations, John : ) Jack

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2011 at 10:56 AM Very soothing and sweet set of limericks here, John-- honored to be third place with you :) congrats!

Gautami Phookan April 10, 2011 at 10:40 AM Nicely done,loved the last stanza very much.Congratulations on your win John...Gautami

Joe Maverick April 10, 2011 at 10:13 AM Congrats on the win here John with this original piece.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 10, 2011 at 9:20 AM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, john

Michael J. Falotico April 10, 2011 at 8:17 AM Congrats John!!!! excellent write my friend...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 10, 2011 at 7:55 AM Congrats Moses on your success in my contest..with this stunning write .. thankxx for your constant support always luv..

Harry Horsman March 21, 2011 at 1:41 AM Wow these are a cut above, john, awesome, good luck. Harry

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2011 at 3:30 PM wow, you did three separate pictures. HOw nice, john, and very clever of you!

Michael J. Falotico March 20, 2011 at 2:33 PM Wow, you just set the bar for the contest!!!! amazing, and Im sure Linda will love it...

Carolyn Devonshire March 20, 2011 at 10:49 AM Wow! Such a beautiful love poem written in limerick form. Your creative use of descriptive imagery is amazing and the reader can feel the love eminating from this poem. Hope you take the top spot, John! Love, Carolyn