Abide of Love Tide

Enticed of love’s glove on sandy beach
Enhanced of love two lover’s beseech
~Sand between the toes
~Graceful love thus glows
Love’s advice in the wind…they seek each!
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As ripple tide to the moon has not lied
By two lover's bide, two soul wills confide 
~Amidst suds of salt 
~Soul loves finds not fault
Like water the bride flows in the groom’s pride
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From beginning dawn of celestial blue
True love’s marriage, clever, is never through
~Two lover’s sweet stroll
~Twilight’s blue is gold
Love’s current, no deterrent, pitching woo 
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Written by John Moses Freeman
For and in honor of Linda Marie
And contest:

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/12/2011 4:48:00 AM
Many congrats John on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this multiple romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:55:00 PM
Your a joy to read John.Congrats on this 3rd.place win.Oh loved this one.Thanks for the kind congrats on my win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your third place win with this wonderful limerick. I enjoyed reading this cleaver write. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:12:00 AM
excellent John, love this, Harry
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Moses in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:57:00 PM
As ripple tide to the moon has not lied So beautiful and romantic, John. Many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:54:00 PM
divine, john!! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:45:00 PM
Congratulations, John on your third place win!! Brian
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:15:00 PM
I just knew this one would do well, john. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:08:00 AM
Many congratulations, John : ) Jack
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:56:00 AM
Very soothing and sweet set of limericks here, John-- honored to be third place with you :) congrats!
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:40:00 AM
Nicely done,loved the last stanza very much.Congratulations on your win John...Gautami
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congrats on the win here John with this original piece.
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Date: 4/10/2011 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, john
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:17:00 AM
Congrats John!!!! excellent write my friend...
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:55:00 AM
Congrats Moses on your success in my contest..with this stunning write .. thankxx for your constant support always luv..
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Date: 3/21/2011 1:41:00 AM
Wow these are a cut above, john, awesome, good luck. Harry
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Date: 3/20/2011 3:30:00 PM
wow, you did three separate pictures. HOw nice, john, and very clever of you!
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Date: 3/20/2011 2:33:00 PM
Wow, you just set the bar for the contest!!!! amazing, and Im sure Linda will love it...
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Date: 3/20/2011 10:49:00 AM
Wow! Such a beautiful love poem written in limerick form. Your creative use of descriptive imagery is amazing and the reader can feel the love eminating from this poem. Hope you take the top spot, John! Love, Carolyn
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