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Abc's of Childhood

. Always bore condemnation, but couldn't deviate. Circumvention dared erupt Dad's exacting force. We both were very stubborn. Seven way ABC poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/1/2010 10:53:00 AM
Nice write!
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:23:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Robert.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:36:00 AM
WOW, this took some time.... Sodoku with words.... EXCELLENT my friend.....:JP]
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Date: 1/31/2010 8:52:00 PM
This must have had your grey matter working overtime. It is so clever, I am very impressed...well done. ... thanks for your comment on my Circus, I have added a footnote. (think car crash at crossing lights) ....Margaret
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Date: 1/31/2010 4:41:00 PM
Oh wow....now this is the best one I've seen!! No doubt, ...!!! Love the way you seperated those words, to make them even more forceful!! Great work and seven ways too...wowser!!! I do love your work...not just idle flatterery!!! It's true! ps...soup mail!!
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Date: 1/31/2010 4:37:00 PM
This is an incredible triple ABC poem, Robeert. You score a triple-A from me in both your construction and the message about the similarities between you and your father! (And how did you know "Angels Flying too Close to the Ground" was one of my favorite songs. Listen to it a lot on my Willie Nelson double CD!) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/31/2010 4:06:00 PM
A fascinating write. So, you're into childhood too! With me it's been a lifelong obsession. Love, daver
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:04:00 PM
Awesome Robert! J
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:56:00 PM
This is very interesting and I like it.Hope all is well with you.I haven't heard from you so I thoght I would say hello.
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