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Abc's of Childhood

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Always            bore       condemnation,
but                 couldn't   deviate.
Circumvention   dared      erupt
Dad's              exacting   force.
   We both were very stubborn.


Seven way ABC poem

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Nicole Sharon Brown

February 1, 2010 at 10:53 AM

Nice write!

Brian Strand

February 1, 2010 at 8:23 AM

Best wishes with this one Robert.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Jared Pickett

February 1, 2010 at 4:36 AM

WOW, this took some time.... Sodoku with words.... EXCELLENT my friend.....:JP]

Margaret Foster

January 31, 2010 at 8:52 PM

This must have had your grey matter working overtime. It is so clever, I am very impressed...well done. ... thanks for your comment on my Circus, I have added a footnote. (think car crash at crossing lights) ....Margaret

Carrie Richards

January 31, 2010 at 4:41 PM

Oh wow....now this is the best one I've seen!! No doubt, ...!!! Love the way you seperated those words, to make them even more forceful!! Great work and seven ways too...wowser!!! I do love your work...not just idle flatterery!!! It's true! ps...soup mail!!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 31, 2010 at 4:37 PM

This is an incredible triple ABC poem, Robeert. You score a triple-A from me in both your construction and the message about the similarities between you and your father! (And how did you know "Angels Flying too Close to the Ground" was one of my favorite songs. Listen to it a lot on my Willie Nelson double CD!) Love, Carolyn