Abc Me

Again, its ime to
Be like a
Child who
Doesn't care that
Each letter must
Find itself joined to another to
Go on a
Hunt
In search of
Just the right combination to
Kindle an alphabet
Lyrical run, but, instead
Marches more
Nearly into an
Obnoxious oblivious
Pursuit to pick up
Quickly a
Rhyme
So sublime its stomach
Turning and grows
Uglier than
Vericose veins or
Wilder than an
Xotic ... (oops, forgot the "e")
Yippety
Zippety-doo-day day!!

on writing and wordsabc

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Adell Foster

November 3, 2008 at 4:43 AM

LOL, Sue this is an adorable abc write, which is true poetry in motion my friend, I awakened this morning singing God has smiled on me and now I find myself singing zippety doo-dah... love it... thank you for helping to start me on my Zippety doo-dah day and I hope that you also have a wonderful day :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, always, Adell

Sharon Winter

November 2, 2008 at 6:16 AM

Love this crazy spontaneous awesome YOU poem! You are truly delightful, open, honest and FUN dear Sue! Enjoyed! Love, Shar

Daver Austin

November 2, 2008 at 4:12 AM

I don't care what form this is, it's compelling because breathless and instantaneous. Love it! Sue, it's been so long since I read Atlantis the Antediluvian World. If I come across it somewhere -God only knows where in this mess I live in - I'll write you an e-mail. Meanwhile, ask at the desk in Barnes and Noble or the library. Love, daver

Kristin Reynolds

November 2, 2008 at 3:53 AM

HA! LOVe the forgotten e in exotic lol yeah, x is tough! Zippity do da day, love it! As for Eugene being a vortex, it most certainly is, at least for me and alot of folks I know. how else do you explain me (from WPG, Canada) and my future husband (from Cape Cod MA) and my very best friend whom I named Eugene (doggie) meeting up there! lol Crazy. I definatly think it's an energy field like Mt shasta is. I so want to go back! I miss it there...:) Love Kristin

John Heck

November 2, 2008 at 1:59 AM

FUN...FUN..FUN...great acrostic/ABC, Sue...and a zippety-doo-da-day to U 2! Hope you enjoy the upcoming holidays...wishing you all my best. Peace always, John

Michael Jordan

November 1, 2008 at 7:57 PM

Sue outstanding poetry - Very well written - God Bless

Mohammad Yamin

November 1, 2008 at 5:22 PM

Wow!!! A child is peeping out of your poem with all his/ her innocence and cuteness. I love your poem. Thanks for your beautiful comment on my poem Inexhaustible Love. Thanks also for pointing out the error in the mention of Form. Believe me, I know the Form. I didn't mean to write "I do not know". How it has happened I do not know. I'll edit it. Mohammad