Shaz Cheesman Poet ABC

Abc - Feelings

About this time - night time
Between the sheets I am wrapped
Cozy and warm - you and me
Delicately I am caressed by your touch
Enveloped by your love
Feeling the intensity of our moment
Goosebumps proudly revealing themselves on naked flesh
Happiness fills me inside and out
I am content beyond my wildest imagination
Jailed willingly in your tower of love
Knotted and tangled deliciously with emotions
Life is on a 24/7 high
Moment to moment that we share
New words expressed, a book begins
Opening the first page words proudly inked
Permanently stained like a tattoo on my skin
Quietly embraced within your arms
Relishing each second, minute and hour
Spent with you tears well inside
Telling you how special this is
Unified is how I feel with you
Vaults of energy pump through my veins
With you love is intense and so profound
Xenocryst are you - unique - my best friend
You are the brightness of stars and the
Zest that fulfills my life - Thank you


I think this is still within the ABC form? Rather than 5 lines I have travelled the alphabet. Let me know if this is not considered an ABC form and i would be happy to edit my post to reflect what style it should be.......

Shaz

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Richard Lamoureux August 2, 2013 at 4:06 PM Just dropping by to say hello

Richard Lamoureux July 25, 2013 at 8:34 AM Good morning Shaz, thanks for taking my suggestion. This is such a great poem. Have a great day. If you have a chance please read my Ice King Poem. I made some changes this morning and would appreciate your thoughts on the poem.

Dan Kearley July 23, 2013 at 11:18 PM I do believe it is an ABC... A lovely one at that! :o)

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2013 at 10:30 PM Shaz, wow! I love this ABC poem. it works for me. thank you for sharing your feelings from a-z... your awesome...LINDA

Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2013 at 6:33 AM Permanently stained like tattoo on skin. Please consider this change. This feels like a free verse which for me is the mark of a great ABC Shaz Cheesman July 23, 2013 at 5:12 PM Hey Rick....I agree that tattoo is better....I guess i tried to be different from a previous post on my personal Just Words blog where I had used tattoo....I willl change it.....Thank you for the suggestion ...Shaz

Jack Ellison July 22, 2013 at 4:50 AM As Milton said, "ABC, XYZ, whatever"... it's a goody, dear Shaz! Hugs from Canada! xoxox

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2013 at 3:48 AM - Being in love feels warm and well .... keep the good feeling .... forever .... love it, sooo sweet Shaz!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Casey Strong July 21, 2013 at 9:24 PM I would consider this ABC form, I could be wrong though. Regardless, this poem is fantastic. Shaz Cheesman July 22, 2013 at 2:26 AM Hi casey - thank you for stopping by - Im glad you enjoyed ....Shaz

Milton Toran July 21, 2013 at 3:57 PM I don't have a clue nor do I care. This is a masterpiece regardless of the form! ABC, XYZ, whatever! LOL!! It's amazing and beautiful! Love the imagery and metaphor! Milt Shaz Cheesman July 22, 2013 at 2:26 AM Hey Thanks Milt Well i will go with the consensus lol