Abatture

Abature leads deep
Abditive road very grooved
Hard to enter in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Kool Haiku Sara>>James
Goff Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 9:32 PM
original pattern of thought! jim
Devonshire Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 1:49 PM
Awesome haiku, Sara! Cleverly worded and quite meaningful. Love, Carolyn (Still in the process of moving, but was suffering Soup withdrawal so I had to visit.)
Higgins Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 1:37 PM
Interesting piece of art.
Arteaga Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 1:14 PM
interesting and thought worthy haiku!
Brown Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Excellent Haiku. Thank you for your comment on my poem. In answer to your question about the Moon flower no I haven't but you can bet thanks to the web I will go look.Love, Carol
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