Premiere Contest WinnerAbandonment

Embraces shatter leaving timeless stories Wrapped in butterfly nets, tied with velvet ribbons Tangled cob webs and ghost blankets Restless feelings and Kodak moments Wasting into forever Alone, rotting in the pantry Forgotten happiness buried by sorrows Telling tomorrow yesterday’s lies A hollow soul searching for absent pieces Going nowhere, tires spinning in mud Falling from grace Finding no one to catch you Reaching out clutching entirely on air Clouds of fog slide between fingertips Walking through mist, traveling over quicksand Trying to find light during a Midnight Sun A solitary fragment in a sea of glass Hearing the sound of silence for the first time The empty feeling unarrival brings Knowing abandonment.
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Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Lovely imagery. Nice to find your poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Congrats on your top placement. Well done.
Jordan Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Beautifully written. Tugs at the heart!!!
Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:12 PM
This is an awesome well-written poem about abandonment!! I am impressed at your poetry. Congratulations on your #1 win! Well done. A fave.
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:33 PM
"telling tomorrow yesterday's lies"..Very well done Leilei. This one made me check the patch on the hole in my soul....Congrats on your placement in the contest
Ajmal Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Such a brilliant and heartfelt write it is, you have certainly describes the emotions or the state of abandon really beautifully, many congratulations on your first position in the contest, good luck and have a nice day
Gauthier Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Fabulous description well deserving of a gold medal win, Leilei. Congrats.
Shaw Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 2:55 AM
Fantastic, beautifully written, deserving win, regards, Kevin x
Gupta Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 11:59 PM
Congratulations on your smiling WIN ... Susan is very right in the assessment ... a deep and lovely poem ...
Roper Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Congratulations ,Leilei, on a great win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Ashley Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Returning with BIG congratulations for your shining trophy win Leilei! I knew your beautifully sad poem possessed that striking emotional quality that allows it to be very deeply felt rather than just simply read. I'm so happy for your win with this spectacular and soulful poem. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Wow! This poem reaches in deep with bitter poignancy and wraps itself around my heart like ' tangled cob webs and ghost blankets'. Your poem can't help but be felt Leilei. So many amazing lines of striking emotional imagery! A deep and beautifully sad write. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Coulston  Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you for your beautifully insightful comments! I'm overwhelmed by your sweet wishes! Thanks again :)
Sands Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Amazing poem this is! Very well expressed Leilei! :)
Coulston  Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much!
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