Abandoned Was My Eventual Fate

Waves of unease flood my heart,
Defying and ignoring my loving touch.
Crippling memories shake me through,
For your angelic image seems so true.

Precious and priceless you are in my eyes,
For I can never bear to see you cry.
Clinging deeply to the love we share,
Treasuring a love that seems so rare.

Severed sinews and battered heart,
Oh, how I long for your tender hug!
Heartening to see you change,
As you walk out of my loving range.

Abandoned was my eventual fate,
For all was deemed too late.
Melancholic and forlorn I became,
Forever forgetting love and pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/27/2012 12:53:00 PM
The Almighty will never abandon you. May you be blessed and find peace my friend.
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Date: 6/25/2012 11:45:00 AM
Very sad. It's very hard to lose someone you loved.
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Date: 6/24/2012 4:44:00 PM
Haden, this is deep...thank you for sharing..always~PD
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:17:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today!
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Date: 6/24/2012 1:25:00 AM
I could use a hug tonight too.
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