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Oh, empty swing, beneath our maple tree- for many years now, withered and distressed; as summer breezes make you sway, I see- remember times when you were truly blessed. For many years now, withered and distressed- abandoned by two generations past; remember times when you were truly blessed by first our children- then, grandchildren last. Abandoned by two generations past- with many years unused between the two- by first our children- then, grandchildren last- recall them swinging when I look at you. With many years unused between the two, as summer breezes make you sway, I see- recall them swinging when I look at you; oh, empty swing, beneath our maple tree. June 18, 2020 Contest: Feelings of Nostalgia Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo #1

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Date: 7/27/2020 5:24:00 PM
aww such feelings of nostalgia Sandra, a charming poem, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2020 11:59:00 AM
Sandra, you placed me there looking out towards the old swing and watching the swing being used by the children. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/19/2020 10:26:00 PM
A beautiful Pantoum Sandra. When my sister bought an "old" new house about 5 years ago. I bought a bench swing to hang from her 150 year old oak tree. It seemed so appropriate.
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