abandoned playgrounds

discarded kites cemented on trees and
abandoned playgrounds with broken swings
must have been brothers in another life
with a mother who wasn't theirs
and a father who wasn't home
or were they calamitous lovers
the sun, and the moon
only to realise one is inferior; sun is a star too
or 
or did they trade their lives for love
did they ever meet again?
someone is certainly exceeding me and
im certainly falling behind
were we, vulgar strangers 
in our forgone lives?
indifferent because our similarities didn't echo
i don't know about you
but i must have been a madman
roaming around with a longing to be found
can a universe apart bring
you together if you're meant to be?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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July 9, 2024 at 2:50 PM
This is so evocative and heartfelt, so deeply moving: i love the lines “ or were they calamitous lovers the sun, and the moon only to realise one is inferior; sun is a star too or ” love that! And also how descriptive this is! And how soulful to end this with a question that readers would feel. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light
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July 9, 2024 at 11:25 AM
some very interesting metaphoric mystery resides in this very intriguing write Nicely done
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