Notes About The Poem

Abandoned Marionette

Strings severed
No more dancing
Can't dance
Useless
Lifeless
With two left feet


Date written and posted: 04/09/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:52 AM
creepy sad Edward..well done! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Ibeh Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Thank you, Laura!
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October 12, 2016 at 11:17 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Edward - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Thanks, Sunshine! I appreciate it...
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