Abandoned by Muse

My muse has left me 
I don’t blame her at all
I bleed peach poetry
And I rarely barely talk

My mood is melancholy 
For I’ve lost inspiration 
Mellow moon is calling
My muse in anticipation 

Shining like a silver star
She dances with no care
Her steps hypnotic free art
Like blue breeze blowing hair

The song she sings
So beautiful like flowers
Creates in me doily dreams
And somber purple powers

Now she took music
With her when she left
As if her very movement 
Curses me blind and deaf

I’ll write of her laugh
Of her smell and her voice 
For she is my past
My remembrance of joy

Perhaps she will come back
When my mood is not so black

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Date: 11/14/2024 12:37:00 PM
Hi Karen, let me start off by saying I don’t have a muse. A famous writer said that “unless you open the faucet..no water Nothing comes out of spout” Sometimes I just can’t write. Nothing is required of me and sometimes I get overly inspired.. it’s OK if you’re not inspired, so what? This has terrific imagery that carries your emotiions ~Be your own Muse. Nothing to wait for.. we are not poetry machines, and those who think they are ..are balmy. )) Hugs Pangie xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/14/2024 1:00:00 PM
lol yes ma’am! Hugs
Date: 11/13/2024 7:48:00 PM
We are waiting for you next poem, hopefully your muse has woken up by now we will see lol.
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Date: 11/13/2024 7:58:00 PM
I wanted to write something but nope still drawing blanks! Lol
Date: 11/13/2024 1:21:00 PM
She's back l believe Karen....now give her a stern talking too hehe!! Debx
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/13/2024 1:39:00 PM
Haha Deb! She plays with my emotions!
Date: 11/13/2024 12:25:00 PM
Hi Karen your muse is alive and kicking, i enjoyed reading your poem. Xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/13/2024 12:47:00 PM
Naw she’s out of the office lol. I haven’t been creative lately but glad you read and enjoyed John.
Date: 11/13/2024 4:52:00 AM
Musings.. she is out to buy you beautiful red and yellow flowers. Wait...dear poet.
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/13/2024 5:05:00 AM
What a lovely thought from a beautiful heart! Thanks dear poet!
Date: 11/12/2024 8:29:00 PM
The muse will come back when your mood lifts, muses just can’t refuse it… Beryl
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/12/2024 10:02:00 PM
I hope so Beryl as my poetry sucks without her!
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