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Abandoned by Muse

My muse has left me I don’t blame her at all I bleed peach poetry And I rarely barely talk My mood is melancholy For I’ve lost inspiration Mellow moon is calling My muse in anticipation Shining like a silver star She dances with no care Her steps hypnotic free art Like blue breeze blowing hair The song she sings So beautiful like flowers Creates in me doily dreams And somber purple powers Now she took music With her when she left As if her very movement Curses me blind and deaf I’ll write of her laugh Of her smell and her voice For she is my past My remembrance of joy Perhaps she will come back When my mood is not so black

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Date: 11/14/2024 12:37:00 PM
Hi Karen, let me start off by saying I don’t have a muse. A famous writer said that “unless you open the faucet..no water Nothing comes out of spout” Sometimes I just can’t write. Nothing is required of me and sometimes I get overly inspired.. it’s OK if you’re not inspired, so what? This has terrific imagery that carries your emotiions ~Be your own Muse. Nothing to wait for.. we are not poetry machines, and those who think they are ..are balmy. )) Hugs Pangie xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/14/2024 1:00:00 PM
lol yes ma’am! Hugs
Date: 11/13/2024 7:48:00 PM
We are waiting for you next poem, hopefully your muse has woken up by now we will see lol.
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/13/2024 7:58:00 PM
I wanted to write something but nope still drawing blanks! Lol
Date: 11/13/2024 1:21:00 PM
She's back l believe Karen....now give her a stern talking too hehe!! Debx
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/13/2024 1:39:00 PM
Haha Deb! She plays with my emotions!
Date: 11/13/2024 12:25:00 PM
Hi Karen your muse is alive and kicking, i enjoyed reading your poem. Xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/13/2024 12:47:00 PM
Naw she’s out of the office lol. I haven’t been creative lately but glad you read and enjoyed John.
Date: 11/13/2024 4:52:00 AM
Musings.. she is out to buy you beautiful red and yellow flowers. Wait...dear poet.
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/13/2024 5:05:00 AM
What a lovely thought from a beautiful heart! Thanks dear poet!
Date: 11/12/2024 8:29:00 PM
The muse will come back when your mood lifts, muses just can’t refuse it… Beryl
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/12/2024 10:02:00 PM
I hope so Beryl as my poetry sucks without her!

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