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Abandoned

the barren light flickers for the last time, sealing fate what thought was meant to be as I was set out, simply free free to roam a solitary heretic in atrophy living where roads bleed upon the horizon rubbed against ruins, in exile exhuming me I'll take the long way, love trailing darkened paths trudging past, weakness spilt as strangers pass through wayward nights holding steady with the light for even the pain, never lasts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/10/2018 8:13:00 PM
Heartfelt words Tim <3
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Date: 1/10/2018 4:40:00 PM
Wondrous parades of verses glorifying feelings dear friend, Tim!
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Date: 1/10/2018 3:48:00 PM
This is such a well expressed beautiful poem Tim. I can feel the sadness and the strength too!
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Date: 1/10/2018 3:12:00 PM
This is beautifully tragic!
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/10/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Anna
Date: 1/10/2018 12:47:00 PM
Oh, Tim, your poem are always so meaningful. Love the write. Hugs Eve
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/10/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Eve

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