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Abandoned

Remember to pack your blue sweater That’s my favorite Then kiss me on my forehead And leave me! Rahy Dec 18, 2015 Written for the contest “SOMETHING WITH GREAT IMPACT! - Poetry Contest “ Number of Words used: 19

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Date: 12/20/2015 11:22:00 AM
I like this imagery; well done. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/21/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Faye... So kind of you to visit and leave such an encouraging comment. Love, Rahy
Date: 12/20/2015 11:02:00 AM
good win
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Date: 12/21/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Skat... Love, Rahy
Date: 12/20/2015 6:04:00 AM
a mellow kind of write, rahy...warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs"
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Date: 12/21/2015 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Nette... I enjoyed writing for your contest... I liked the challenge :) Love, Rahy