Abandoned

Remember to pack your blue sweater That’s my favorite Then kiss me on my forehead And leave me! Rahy Dec 18, 2015 Written for the contest “SOMETHING WITH GREAT IMPACT! - Poetry Contest “ Number of Words used: 19

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Faye Gibson

Date: 12/20/2015 11:22:00 AM

I like this imagery; well done. Congratulations.

Rahy Hy
Date: 12/21/2015 12:32:00 PM

Thank you Faye... So kind of you to visit and leave such an encouraging comment. Love, Rahy

SKAT A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:02:00 AM

good win

Rahy Hy
Date: 12/21/2015 12:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Skat... Love, Rahy

nette onclaud

Date: 12/20/2015 6:04:00 AM

a mellow kind of write, rahy...warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs"

Rahy Hy
Date: 12/21/2015 12:33:00 PM

Thank you Nette... I enjoyed writing for your contest... I liked the challenge :) Love, Rahy