Rahy Hy Poet Free verse

Abandoned

Remember to pack your blue sweater 
That’s my favorite
Then kiss me on my forehead
And  leave me!

Rahy
Dec 18, 2015
Written for the contest “SOMETHING WITH GREAT IMPACT! - Poetry Contest “
Number of Words used: 19

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Faye Gibson December 20, 2015 at 11:22 AM I like this imagery; well done. Congratulations. Rahy Hy December 21, 2015 at 12:32 PM Thank you Faye... So kind of you to visit and leave such an encouraging comment. Love, Rahy

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:02 AM good win Rahy Hy December 21, 2015 at 12:32 PM Thank you so much Skat... Love, Rahy

Nette Onclaud December 20, 2015 at 6:04 AM a mellow kind of write, rahy...warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs" Rahy Hy December 21, 2015 at 12:33 PM Thank you Nette... I enjoyed writing for your contest... I liked the challenge :) Love, Rahy