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Abandoned

exiled thoughts in a vacant lot an abandoned path that trails He loves me...He loves me not a thousand dreams all forgot heavy emptiness behind veils exiled thoughts in a vacant lot fragile pain in rust and wrought Dead Sea of tears, sorrow sails He loves me...He loves me not left on doorstep, is what you got a lonely home, struggles and fails exiled thoughts in a vacant lot fate untied an entangled knot drifting apart, now hate entails He loves me...he loves me not lost in orbit, burdens brought pangs of past, all trust derails exiled thoughts in a vacant lot He loves me...He loves me not

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Date: 9/12/2023 5:40:00 PM
Debjani, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Date: 8/21/2023 8:23:00 PM
Oh wow! I love the way you employed the two refrains, repeating throughout the poem. Warmest congratulations on your win, Debjani
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