Anisha Dutta Poet Rhyme

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08/19/23

Angelic or Abandoned  words 

Second Place

Contest by La Constance France.

Abandoned

‘ When continuous piercing  or pricking turns wound  malignant , be desperate to get
     operated.’ - Poet.

    
        ABANDONED

                  
       I am fed up with some relation,
           identifying guilt on their part.
               I failed to make any correction.
                  I ignore and let them just apart.

        I tried my best somehow to adjust 
             giving them several chances.
                  They are selfish not at all to trust,
                        only creating nuisances.

         I could neither punish nor rectify.
              What to do with the person?
                    I discard as can’t further rely.
                         No alternative, but to abandon.

       When wound of heart turning malignant,
           Not to waste time unnecessary.
               Not to wait and watch, being patient,
                    Get rid of your wound by surgery.

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Constance La France September 12, 2023 at 5:41 PM Anisha, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the quote, Constance

Unseeking Seeker August 21, 2023 at 8:18 PM Wise words, Anisha. Why trauma bond? Yet, I’d suggest try Ho’oponopono or a similar forgiveness prayer for self-healing. Warmest congratulations on your win in the contest.

Bj Legros Kelley August 19, 2023 at 5:47 PM Sometimes, when we have to walk away, it is because we first are those who were abandoned. It is hurtful to try, try, and try again when it is destroying yourself. Seek those who can receive your precious love and sweet heart Anisha, and those who stomp on you cannot be good for you. I have pulled away from destructive people who were destroyers. I pray that you are blessed with kindness and good friends. The worst enemies are those who have outposts in our minds, so, good thoughts! :) ~hugs~ <3 Anisha Dutta August 20, 2023 at 11:19 PM Met more envious destructive people than good and helping guys. That's life. Experienced both gratitude and betrayal. Ultimately I have learnt this lesson to ignore, avoid and discard. Thanks for visit and appreciation.

Sotto Poet August 19, 2023 at 2:13 PM The eloquence and rhythm displayed in your choice of words and the overall composition of this poem are truly captivating. Your talent for crafting such beautiful words is just inspiring Anisha. Good luck with the contest Anisha Dutta August 20, 2023 at 11:23 PM Thanks Sotto Poet. Now I appreciate you as the most admirable poet in poetry soup with awesome vocabulary and command in English. My drawback is that, English is my second language and as me taught in Science stream got no scope to go through English literature. Poetry soup is my first venture since my entry for last six years. Regards.

Yann Rolland August 18, 2023 at 11:32 PM insisting can be bad, thanks for the touching poem, i 'woulds do the same yann Anisha Dutta August 19, 2023 at 7:20 AM Thanks for visit and appreciation. Have Good Days. Blessings.