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Abandoned

forsaken in silence and despair, my heart wilted from fail promises. it's darkest bleak vault. I curse each weeping tear from my desolate eyes, left with lost sleep. whispers of failures are all I hear a castoff. 6/16/2020 Yalto: Line 1 to 15: 3,-4-2,-4-5-3-2-3-2-3-3-5-6-1-5 syllables. Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Date: 6/24/2020 7:40:00 PM
Eve, congratulation on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance
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Date: 6/22/2020 12:54:00 PM
Heart wrenching poem.Expressed very well mam:-)Keep writing and keep inspiring with your muse mam. Take care.With love~Deepa
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Date: 6/22/2020 8:17:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Eve. Much love :)
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Date: 6/19/2020 6:17:00 PM
Magnificent poetry form. Very well expressed. Stay safe and well.
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:07:00 AM
Oh, what a loveliness! An instant FAVE for me.!
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Date: 6/17/2020 6:45:00 AM
I love how the creative presentation of this poem makes me witness an added layer to your emotions. This is gorgeous Eve :)
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Date: 6/17/2020 4:32:00 AM
I can feel your expressions...Well done
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Date: 6/17/2020 12:27:00 AM
Love the poem, and the shape..Eve
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Date: 6/16/2020 6:00:00 AM
forsaken in silence and despair.....wonderful expression with innovative format
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Date: 6/16/2020 3:18:00 AM
Hi Eve,this is a great emotional write and to do it within the confines of such a strict form makes it even more impressive,, best wishes, anthony
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Date: 6/16/2020 12:49:00 AM
You did exceptionally well in the form.. Great write Eve.. Good luck in the contest..
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