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I watched a prompting feature by a dynamic actor, his life seemed vivacious with an ardent factor; today I heard he'd hanged himself to an annulled death, deserted fears overpowered zeal in his last breath. I read an exuberant story by a young wizard of words, he weaved a mystical world of magical unbound birds; today I read he'd poisoned himself desolate in bed, forsaken wounds hidden in his entranced utopia bled. I lulled to sleep listening to a soothing old song, the vocalist hummed a hopeful melody of spirits strong; today I found he'd killed himself in a forgotten car crash, derelict ruins of his past made his symphony backlash. I wondered why remarkable people succumb to pain, until I witnessed a neglected neighbor cry amid rain; he has always been bounteous to those he greets, with bubbling rhapsodies of witty puns he treats. I remembered the times I've been withdrawn, glum, reverberating void rejected flickers of hope so numb; in times like those my stranded ship found a shore, when I turned my disowned courage to a meek roar. While lost souls bask in shimmers of uplifting drops in rays, their suspended cobwebs in dark alleys lit by smiles in haze; I wish we hold marooned hands to keep walking ahead, my unnoticed neighbor gleams with healing tears shed.
*Poet's Note: A promising artist hanged himself to death today which led me to ponder upon something I have felt. I've always witnessed great uplifting souls(even commoners) to bid goodbye to this world when the last drop of their courage evaporated. Most of the people mask their pain behind their courageous, upfront, cheerful selves publicly. The world needs more love, hope and blessings to let people notice and understand each other because every single human being experiences depression at some point in life. It is none but we who can be the guiding light to each other. This year has been a test of faith already. Let's help ourselves and others to heal the souls.* June 14, 2020 Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance(Dear Heart) ~Winner: First Place

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Date: 7/8/2020 9:23:00 AM
This is a very meaningful poem and so well written. Congratulations.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/8/2020 9:25:00 AM
Glad you loved it Richard. Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation :)
Date: 6/24/2020 7:07:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my Abandon contest with this beautiful and emotional write. It is so true that when someone talented commits suicide it boggles the mind as to why _Constance
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/25/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thank you for appreciating my emotions and words Constance. Always an honor for me. Thanks for my placement in your Contest. Blessings and much love :)
Date: 6/22/2020 4:07:00 PM
every once in a while a poet shows up on poetry soup that has something to say, you are one of those poets my dear poetic friend...congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/22/2020 4:30:00 PM
I am honoured by such thoughtful words of appreciation from you. Thank you for your kind wishes Frederic :)
Date: 6/22/2020 2:41:00 PM
BIG congrats Aditi, on your TOP win--a powerful, emotive write.
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Date: 6/22/2020 2:49:00 PM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Vijay. God bless you :)
Date: 6/22/2020 12:26:00 PM
Back to you with my heartily Congratulations mam:-)Keep writing.Keep inspiring.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa
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Date: 6/22/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and wishes dear Deepa :) Blessings and much love :)
Date: 6/22/2020 9:38:00 AM
this is a powerful write and thank you for your ode to all who give their last farewell in desperation. Congrats to you on your win too.
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Date: 6/22/2020 10:06:00 AM
I am glad you absorbed the essence of my words dear Jeanne. Love to hear from you. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Much love :)
Date: 6/22/2020 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Aditi! The Thesaurus is so impressive! You are so creative, Dear Poet! Love, Mala
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thank you for your generous words of appreciation dear Mala! God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/22/2020 1:19:00 AM
So happy for you for your #1 win with this soulful and heartrending poem Aditi. I congratulate you again ~ John
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:30:00 AM
Glad to be appreciated by you dear friend. Thank you for your kind wishes. God bless you John :)
Date: 6/22/2020 12:45:00 AM
Beautifully crafted, Anisha. Love the way you integrated all the definitions of abandoned. Very unique and creative. Congratulations on yor top win.
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:30:00 AM
Glad you love my words Sam. Thank you for your kind appreciation. God bless you-- Aditi
Date: 6/21/2020 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement Aditi for your meaningful poem. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:29:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words of appreciation Connie. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/21/2020 12:30:00 PM
And facilitation on your Top win
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:29:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes Gideon. God bless you :)
Date: 6/21/2020 12:28:00 PM
An interesting piece Well graphed Aditi Picturesque "Silence an inside and gentle killer A problems shared is half solved A problem kept within is multiplied ×2" Most great people passed on painfully Due to self medic. Weldon Aditi.
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:28:00 AM
That's so true Gideon. I hope people speak up when troubled and others stop judging them. Only then can the world be a better place. Thank you for your kind appreciation :)
Date: 6/21/2020 12:28:00 PM
Excellent composition as usual. Always Top Rank. Blessings
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:27:00 AM
My pleasure you loved it Ma'am. Thank you for your blessings. God bless you :)
Date: 6/21/2020 12:00:00 PM
Amazing like always, Aditi, great write, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:27:00 AM
Blessed by your generous appreciation Eve. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/18/2020 4:15:00 AM
You have expressed yourself very clearly in these sad and striking lines, Aditi. Most of the time we see what's on the outside, and often do not realize what's going on inside! Unfortunately many suffer on their own till eventually it is too late. ~ Regards // paul
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/20/2020 12:08:00 PM
Sadly it is always after people leave that we realize what they must have been going through. Glad you love my words Paul. Thank you for your visit and kind words of appreciation. Blessings :)
Date: 6/16/2020 2:17:00 AM
You've done a great job in depicting the sadness of these lives, and keeping with the theme of abandoned synonyms. A deep topic worthy of the compassion you bring to it. Well done, friend. May God bless you richly ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:57:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words dear friend. I have seen and felt this emotion around me so many times that I hope everyone knows how to make it through. Blessings. Have a good day. :)
Date: 6/15/2020 7:10:00 PM
Oh, this is so sad but written with amazing insight, Aditi! Suicide is tragic and happens too often. Thanks for bringing awareness and remembering a few of those who have suffered with depression. It's true that many suffer in silence behind a joke or a smile. When I hear of someone taking their life, it breaks my heart. Thank you for sharing your talent, dear poet. Hugs, Rhonda xx
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:56:00 AM
I remember so many people who have suffered this Rhonda and most of the times they are not even aware of it or they choose to be courageous and keep battling with themselves. It breaks my heart when I realize how less we notice people around us. I wish we start healing souls that need help. Thank you for your kind words Rhonda. You are a beautiful soul. Much love
Date: 6/15/2020 5:16:00 PM
" A promising artist hanged himself to death today" I read about an Indian movie star suicide 2-3 days ago, is that who you speak of, Aditi? Brilliant yet sad write! Such a terrible tragedy:-(
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:54:00 AM
Yes Edward. I was moved by his death. He was a brilliant learner of Physics, once an engineer, left everything to pursue his passion towards acting. It is really devastating.
Date: 6/15/2020 12:47:00 AM
A great testimony for this contest Aditi. They do hide their pain well. My beautiful friend took her own life when young. She feared she might because her mother and brother were in mental institutions. It has haunted me for years that I couldn't help her. This is a thought provoking poem well written Aditi. xxoo
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/15/2020 8:31:00 AM
I hope her soul found peace. That's really heartbreaking. What pains me is that these people keep struggling until they find the only path out to death. I wish every being finds a ray of hope and faith to survive. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Connie. Much love. Take care :)
Date: 6/14/2020 11:49:00 PM
Brilliant writing with a very sad tone...but brings rays of hope at the end...your my cup of tea, Aditi...(((Hugs))) dear poetic sister...^WW^ :o)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/15/2020 8:27:00 AM
My darkness always leads me to those rays of hope towards the end. Glad to be appreciated by a poetic wizard and being your poetic sister is a badge of honor for me WW! Thank you for those extremely kind words of encouragement. God bless you ^_^
Date: 6/14/2020 3:44:00 PM
the eternal question my dear poet, why is pain stronger than life? no one knows as it makes no sense to anyone but those who chose death, the price of their talent may be their madness, a cost that is unimaginable to most...good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/15/2020 8:25:00 AM
Those who choose death have perhaps surpassed the limit to their courage and don't find the rays of hope anywhere. They probably dwell on those thoughts for years. I hope those struggling with paranoia and pain find their lost hopes and survive. Thank you for your wishes Frederic. God bless you :)
Date: 6/14/2020 3:15:00 PM
Hai mam, Asusual to say ..you have penned very well:-).Good luck:-).Words are too strong and emotional. I know your talking about young Hindi actor Sushant Singh Rajput.Even I am feeling extremely sorrowful hearing the news.Sitting upset since morning..:-(:-(:-( Everyone suffers internal pain ..some share and others don't.May his soul RIP. Just 5 days ago kannada young actor Chiranjeevi Sarja demised.Feeling sad for him too.:-( We are losing young legends during this pandemic time. Let's pray for everyone and send our healing love. Take care.Much love.~Deepa:-)
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Date: 6/15/2020 8:23:00 AM
I didn't know how to grasp the information initially. It is sad that with advanced means of communication, people have nobody with whom they can share their grief. This has happened with so many people and we still watch the process repeating itself. Sad to hear about the Kannada actor. I hope love and hope reaches everyone in need. Take care Deepa. Thank you for your kind uplifting words :) Much love
Date: 6/14/2020 12:04:00 PM
Wow. Incredible entry. I wish you all the best in the contest, dear friend. Love and prayers for you, God bless you! Gina
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/14/2020 1:03:00 PM
Your generous words are a blessing for me Gina. Thank your for your kind words of appreciation. God bless you. Much love :)

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