Abandoned

Abandoned
I have read and told little white lies to bring smiles to faces of old folk, abandoned! I have reared lambs and calves and piglets too, not knowing why they were abandoned? I have seen left wrapped up warm, with a note, which gives a name of the babe abandoned! I've rescued and successfully reared carrion crow chicks when a farmer shot the mum and dad, which left them abandoned! Been tempted to pick up tawny owl chicks, which whilst on the ground looked abandoned; did pick them up and placed them safely where mum and dad could find them. A long time ago fell out with religion, even to this day I look around and see the poor souls it has abandoned. Oh yes, I do have faith, in one, Mother Nature, it so breaks my heart to find that in all she has done for us, she too, is now being, yes, abandoned! Abandon 2 Poetry Contest, sponsored by Brenda Chiri 07/14/18

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Date: 7/27/2018 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 7/27/2018 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mick . I enjoyed reading this heartfelt well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2018 4:58:00 PM
Mick, this is excellent prose with much to think about, but your ending really hits home our shame. Congratulations on your 1st Place win.
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Date: 7/25/2018 9:38:00 AM
Well this piece rips me new one ;) fave and congratulations my poet friend. xomo <3
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:56:00 AM
Filled with heart, congrats on top placement.
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:18:00 AM
Unless we learn to live in harmony with the earth it will be us left abandoned without any food. A profound poem with a wonderful message Mick. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! : )
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Date: 7/14/2018 5:51:00 PM
Well written Mick, so true in your closing lines, mother nature abandoned. Good luck. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/15/2018 12:36:00 AM
The latest in my area whole lanes stripped of hedges & mature trees y Costs councils less 2 maintain, I'm not joking everywhere I look It's tantamount 2 felling a forest if all local councils are adopting that as a method 2 reduce their cost crazy Oh! & I mustn't 4get their health and safety policy, I tell you they no not what they do & how about this then the local park attendant responsible 4 maintaining the herbaceous borders & its general tidiness retired Well the litter problem was kept under control however the borders were not the solution STRIM them Them & me devasted
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