Abandon Ship!

Abandon ship! Were going down!
down to Davy Jones' part of town.
captain and crew both their fate to be,
for they all comprise one entity.
flooding complete,
no space to stand,
sink or swim,
come on and take my hand.
a guide to where you need to go,
lost between sane and the shadows.
is it I to blame for what has happened,
or was it a plan, 
take my mind and take my passion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 8, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Welcome to the soup...like the big ocean of soup you describe in this wonderful poem. stop by and read some of my poems to see if I am as crazy as I think I am!..... ;)
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