Abandon

donot forsake the traditions
golden is the olden wisdom
lifeguard in hard conditions.

limit the material acquisitions
deserted become kingdoms
donot forsake the traditions.

trial and error tribulations
fill up experience schisms
lifeguard in hard conditions.

families enjoy celeberations
dance, music, soul rhythms
donot forsake the traditions.

progress enhances positions
do not spoil natural systems
lifeguard in hard conditions.

happier are the civilisations
that firmly root their visions
donot forsake the traditions
lifeguard in hard conditions.

21.6.2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/24/2020 7:50:00 PM
Mohan, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest _Constance
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/26/2020 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Constance
Date: 6/22/2020 12:24:00 PM
Very wisely written sir:-) True.We must not forsake our golden traditions. Well done sir.Keep writing and inspire us with your muse.Loved it.:-) Congratulations on your win. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/23/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thankyou Deepa. Congratulations to you as well for your own fine placement. Mohan
Date: 6/22/2020 8:32:00 AM
Golden words of wisdom for lifetime with excellent narration Mohan. Congratulations on your win :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thankyou Aditi. And congratulations to you as well for your fine muse on this topic. Best. Mohan
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