A Zeal for Dawn

Written: January 29, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand ~~~~~~~~~~~ Wild is the dawn, clad in lace and slight sheen. The deep rose taste sends a dash of sweet zeal. The love grasp, soaked in the swell of space song. "Tien forms a series of 3 sentences of ten words of one syllable, with a title inspired by Chidlock Tichborne and created by Poet Brian Strand"
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Hind Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 4:26 PM
Lovely!
Beaufort Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 3:44 PM
SP, the form using one-syllable words makes it easier to follow for a simpleton like me!!! In any case, the dawn is a wonderful thing the way you describe it! Smiles!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 4:00 PM
What an interesting form. I wonder if it is the one he showed in today's blog
Goldsmith Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 10:40 AM
What a creative write. I really enjoyed reading this different type of a poem. Thanks for the added note. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.............
Narain Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Nicely crafted poem. Fits well in Didactic format.
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