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A Zeal for Dawn

Written: January 29, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand ~~~~~~~~~~~ Wild is the dawn, clad in lace and slight sheen. The deep rose taste sends a dash of sweet zeal. The love grasp, soaked in the swell of space song. "Tien forms a series of 3 sentences of ten words of one syllable, with a title inspired by Chidlock Tichborne and created by Poet Brian Strand"

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Date: 2/7/2025 4:26:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 1/31/2025 3:44:00 PM
SP, the form using one-syllable words makes it easier to follow for a simpleton like me!!! In any case, the dawn is a wonderful thing the way you describe it! Smiles!!
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Date: 1/29/2025 4:00:00 PM
What an interesting form. I wonder if it is the one he showed in today's blog
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Date: 1/29/2025 10:40:00 AM
What a creative write. I really enjoyed reading this different type of a poem. Thanks for the added note. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 1/29/2025 9:56:00 AM
Nicely crafted poem. Fits well in Didactic format.
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