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A Yummy Third Eye

Now how about this my jolly good friends Grew a third eye overnight, miracles never end Can see fifty percent more More lust than before Can spy on one and a half girlies, less time to spend?

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/14/2018 2:01:00 PM

Lol, it was such a funny little poem to read, you my friend do have a really creative mind, just imagine, a guy talking to a guy, how much advantage can a third eye give us( I am discussing about the things you mentioned in your poem),lol, don't get me wrong, it is just a joke

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/14/2018 2:16:00 PM

Happy that you saw the humor Faraz!!! You have become a welcome good friend!!! Cheers, Jack

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/14/2018 10:50:00 AM

Giggles and guffaws ;) xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/14/2018 2:12:00 PM

One and a half smiles, my dear MoMo!!! LOL Lovesie, Happy Jack XOX