A Youthful Dream Is An Old Man's Endeavor

A youthful dream is an old man's endeavor
Fading weaking health and wellness an old man's youthful body full of vigor it dreams. 1/16/2023 Quote this Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise
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Daniel Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 10:44 PM
All that's left if youthful vigour are dreams, very true, Eve:)
Sands Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 11:40 AM
Well written and described Eve :)
Logan Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Whatever thoughts, including dreams, makes us feel better, do it.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Superb writing, Eve. You were always romantic at heart.
Tor Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 9:01 AM
Love your theme Eve so much truth in your words. I am 62 and I know exactly what you mean. Thanks for sharing and Hope you are well my Dear...
Cunningham Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 8:03 AM
We often forget we're not 20 anymore and feel stiff the next day. Hope your new year is off to a good start Eve. Tom
Bell Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Was thinking, onwards and upwards, but maybe not. You're as young as you feel they lie.
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Paul, I'm 72 in a week, and my energy level and my body always feels sore. Aging sucks. From a very hyper person , always wanting to work, is all dwindling down. Now, dreaming for a day of energy to run with the dog or my grandchild.
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