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A Youthful Dream Is An Old Man's Endeavor

A youthful dream is an old man's endeavor Fading weaking health and wellness an old man's youthful body full of vigor it dreams. 1/16/2023 Quote this Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/18/2023 10:44:00 PM

All that's left if youthful vigour are dreams, very true, Eve:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/18/2023 11:40:00 AM

Well written and described Eve :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/17/2023 5:51:00 AM

Whatever thoughts, including dreams, makes us feel better, do it.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/16/2023 9:25:00 AM

Superb writing, Eve. You were always romantic at heart.

Michael Tor

Date: 1/16/2023 9:01:00 AM

Love your theme Eve so much truth in your words. I am 62 and I know exactly what you mean. Thanks for sharing and Hope you are well my Dear...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2023 8:03:00 AM

We often forget we're not 20 anymore and feel stiff the next day. Hope your new year is off to a good start Eve. Tom

Paul Bell

Date: 1/16/2023 7:49:00 AM

Was thinking, onwards and upwards, but maybe not. You're as young as you feel they lie.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/16/2023 8:01:00 AM

Paul, I'm 72 in a week, and my energy level and my body always feels sore. Aging sucks. From a very hyper person , always wanting to work, is all dwindling down. Now, dreaming for a day of energy to run with the dog or my grandchild.