Andrea Dietrich Poet I do not know?

A Yearbook Pickup Line

He wrote inside my 9th grade yearbook: "I'd like to get with you inside a kayak."

 Today I would respond: 
"Your kisses were so heavenly, but you abandoned me. 
So it's a 'no' to me and you together in a small canoe!"

Dedicated to my first kiss, Glenn, a real son-of-a-preacher man.

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Phyllis Babcock August 7, 2015 at 9:53 AM Ha ha the son of a preacher man that is cute. love phyl

Brandon Carter May 30, 2015 at 10:04 AM Too funny!

Skat A May 16, 2015 at 12:13 PM lol, yeah i read this one. kind of cheesy but cool

Jaycee Cervenka May 6, 2015 at 4:05 PM Congrats on your first in the contest! Thanks for the well wishes on mine! Janet

Skat A May 6, 2015 at 10:03 AM Andrea :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A May 6, 2015 at 9:34 AM Interesting and cute Andrea. I Like the note he left you on that yearbook.. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

Joseph May May 6, 2015 at 6:49 AM You were his dreamboat...Congrats on your win

Richard Lamoureux May 5, 2015 at 8:03 PM I alway found the best pick up line was "Hi" and a smile. I enjoyed your youthful tale, congratulations. Judy Konos May 5, 2015 at 9:21 PM Yes...Hi and a smile works well...as long as you have a Richard Lamoureux face!

Robert Stoner Jr May 5, 2015 at 5:01 PM Andrea you are so domesticated these days you must go back to 9th grade for a pick up line? lol.Congratulations on your win. Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2015 at 5:19 PM I think it is the only one I ever got. I didn't hang out in bars and just met guys very naturally!!! Hubbie always uses the cheesy ones on me for fun!

Tim Ryerson May 5, 2015 at 4:52 PM "The only one who could ever teach me, was the son-of-preacher-man. Yes he was, yes he was, yes he--- WAS"...Andrea, ANDREA! Your first kiss was when you were only in the 9th GRADE?? I find that rather shocking. I certainly hope it was only a peck on the cheek...BIG congrats my friend! Hugs and first kisses - Tim Tim Ryerson May 5, 2015 at 5:37 PM Well, He was some kind of a lucky guy and yes PLEASE, Soup Mail the title when you remember it... Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2015 at 5:01 PM ummm, it was a hellava lot better than a peck on the cheek. I wrote a poem all about this guy, who was from Alabama. But now I completely forgot the title. If I remember, I will let you know!! (he was my best friends' cousin and I met him when I went to Alabama with her family.)

Eve Roper May 5, 2015 at 4:14 PM Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Jan Allison May 5, 2015 at 2:50 PM Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2015 at 6:35 AM Great pick-up line, Andrea, and apparently it worked for him! First loves are always special. Enjoyed this one! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick May 3, 2015 at 7:04 AM Enjoyed reading this one today..I did not know that there were kayaks way back then..LOL..Thanks for all the visits to my p age..Sara

M. L. Kiser May 3, 2015 at 1:41 AM Best of luck with that one; I love it.

Connie Marcum Wong May 3, 2015 at 1:36 AM You are so clever Andrea...loved your son-of-a-preacher man!

Thomas Martin May 2, 2015 at 5:24 PM Hi Andrea, You could win with this jewel!!

Matthew Anish May 2, 2015 at 1:54 PM I remember playing Spin the Bottle - you kissed to whoever spun the bottle in your direction, Ah, yes - memories of youth! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

James Peranteau May 2, 2015 at 8:24 AM Well, a closer look into Andrea ! First kiss, wow ! And I'm certain the canoe would have been awesome, if you were the appropriate age; 30 ! *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend dear poet....much love, james

Jan Allison May 2, 2015 at 5:15 AM aww cute lovely to see it was a real line:-) Hugs Jan good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx