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A Yearbook Pickup Line

He wrote inside my 9th grade yearbook: "I'd like to get with you inside a kayak."

 Today I would respond: 
"Your kisses were so heavenly, but you abandoned me. 
So it's a 'no' to me and you together in a small canoe!"

Dedicated to my first kiss, Glenn, a real son-of-a-preacher man.

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 8/7/2015 9:53:00 AM Ha ha the son of a preacher man that is cute. love phyl Login to Reply

Brandon Carter Date: 5/30/2015 10:04:00 AM Too funny! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/16/2015 12:13:00 PM lol, yeah i read this one. kind of cheesy but cool Login to Reply

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 5/6/2015 4:05:00 PM Congrats on your first in the contest! Thanks for the well wishes on mine! Janet Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/6/2015 10:03:00 AM Andrea :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT* Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/6/2015 9:34:00 AM Interesting and cute Andrea. I Like the note he left you on that yearbook.. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/6/2015 6:49:00 AM You were his dreamboat...Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/5/2015 8:03:00 PM I alway found the best pick up line was "Hi" and a smile. I enjoyed your youthful tale, congratulations. Login to Reply Judy Konos Date: 5/5/2015 9:21:00 PM Yes...Hi and a smile works well...as long as you have a Richard Lamoureux face!

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 5/5/2015 5:01:00 PM Andrea you are so domesticated these days you must go back to 9th grade for a pick up line? lol.Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/5/2015 5:19:00 PM I think it is the only one I ever got. I didn't hang out in bars and just met guys very naturally!!! Hubbie always uses the cheesy ones on me for fun!

Tim Ryerson Date: 5/5/2015 4:52:00 PM "The only one who could ever teach me, was the son-of-preacher-man. Yes he was, yes he was, yes he--- WAS"...Andrea, ANDREA! Your first kiss was when you were only in the 9th GRADE?? I find that rather shocking. I certainly hope it was only a peck on the cheek...BIG congrats my friend! Hugs and first kisses - Tim Login to Reply Tim Ryerson Date: 5/5/2015 5:37:00 PM Well, He was some kind of a lucky guy and yes PLEASE, Soup Mail the title when you remember it... Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/5/2015 5:01:00 PM ummm, it was a hellava lot better than a peck on the cheek. I wrote a poem all about this guy, who was from Alabama. But now I completely forgot the title. If I remember, I will let you know!! (he was my best friends' cousin and I met him when I went to Alabama with her family.)

Eve Roper Date: 5/5/2015 4:14:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/5/2015 2:50:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/5/2015 6:35:00 AM Great pick-up line, Andrea, and apparently it worked for him! First loves are always special. Enjoyed this one! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/3/2015 7:04:00 AM Enjoyed reading this one today..I did not know that there were kayaks way back then..LOL..Thanks for all the visits to my p age..Sara Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 5/3/2015 1:41:00 AM Best of luck with that one; I love it. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/3/2015 1:36:00 AM You are so clever Andrea...loved your son-of-a-preacher man! Login to Reply

Thomas Martin Date: 5/2/2015 5:24:00 PM Hi Andrea, You could win with this jewel!! Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 5/2/2015 1:54:00 PM I remember playing Spin the Bottle - you kissed to whoever spun the bottle in your direction, Ah, yes - memories of youth! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 5/2/2015 8:24:00 AM Well, a closer look into Andrea ! First kiss, wow ! And I'm certain the canoe would have been awesome, if you were the appropriate age; 30 ! *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend dear poet....much love, james Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/2/2015 5:15:00 AM aww cute lovely to see it was a real line:-) Hugs Jan good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply