"a Year Later Moma"

It's been a year and I miss her so much. I miss her face and I miss her touch. My heart broke when she died. Now I'm alone thats why I cry. Our mom was all we ever had. She was both our mom and dad. I'll miss her with all my heart. When she left it broke apart. Teresa Skyles

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/27/2009 2:11:00 PM

Yes i bet that's the truth of it, Teresa. That's the truth of it. But I think from your poems, she left a wonderful person here to carry on. Bet she's proud. God bless you-Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2009 3:11:00 PM

God bless you, Teresa. Although my mom has been gone a long time, I still miss her a lot. Considering the fact that she raised you by herself, she must have been a very important part of your life. This is a very touching, tender poem that clearly shows your great love for her! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2009 2:39:00 PM

I feel your pain. It is especially bad to lose someone near or on a special occasion. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara