Edward Ibeh Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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A World Without You

I fear very much
immense upswelling
of melancholy
and desperation.
You'll create a void...

should you depart!
Do promise me 
you'll always wake 
with me come dawn.

Never flee!
Life would be...
so empty;

barren
without

you.


BRIAN'S SELECT 7,any form,any theme
Contest Judged:  6/7/2020 (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand |

A World Without You Poetry Contest (Winner: 5th Place)
Sponsored by JCB Burl 
Date written: 05/29/2020

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Aditi Mishra June 1, 2020 at 4:09 PM Back to congratulate you on your win Edward :) Edward Ibeh June 1, 2020 at 4:37 PM Thanks again, Aditi:-) God bless.

Aditi Mishra May 29, 2020 at 1:49 PM Your words leave me emotional in the end. This is a brilliant write! All the best Edward :) Edward Ibeh May 29, 2020 at 2:56 PM Thank you very much, Aditi:-) I'm glad this poem resonated with you. Stay safe out there, my friend!