A World Without You

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I fear very much immense upswelling of melancholy and desperation. You'll create a void... should you depart! Do promise me you'll always wake with me come dawn. Never flee! Life would be... so empty; barren without you. BRIAN'S SELECT 7,any form,any theme Contest Judged: 6/7/2020 (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand | A World Without You Poetry Contest (Winner: 5th Place) Sponsored by JCB Burl Date written: 05/29/2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/1/2020 4:09:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win Edward :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/1/2020 4:37:00 PM

Thanks again, Aditi:-) God bless.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/29/2020 1:49:00 PM

Your words leave me emotional in the end. This is a brilliant write! All the best Edward :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/29/2020 2:56:00 PM

Thank you very much, Aditi:-) I'm glad this poem resonated with you. Stay safe out there, my friend!