A WORLD WITHOUT WAR

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For A World Without War Poetry Contest sponsor Anouncheka Gangabissoon

Without war we would be living a dream We would share the land and live in unity Making love more, with no war, like bunnies Even cloudy days would seem so sunny Earth would glow with a gold holy light We would work together to unite No longer a need to have boarders divide No longer national creed, we are one tribe And without war our resources would be saved We could feed the poor and ourselves be more safe Without the danger of bombs and chemicals made We could be free indeed and sing of happy days

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/8/2024 7:36:00 PM

A blessing with out war. Well said, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/8/2024 7:47:00 PM

Eve thank you

Jeanine Dejesus

Date: 3/6/2024 2:45:00 AM

This is truly a beautiful poem. I especially like the bunny part it was cute. Lol.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/6/2024 3:49:00 AM

Thanks Jeanine!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/5/2024 7:07:00 AM

A world without war would a dream come true, not only for me but everyone too. A wonderful write Karen… Beryl

Karen Jones
Date: 3/5/2024 8:14:00 AM

Thanks Beryl!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/5/2024 6:39:00 AM

Karen, Your poem resonated with me on a deep level, as your words beautifully conveyed a shared emotional connection. The imagery you painted evoked a concern for the state of our world and a desire for a more harmonious existence, free from the destructive forces of ego and power-driven motivations that often lead to conflict.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/5/2024 8:13:00 AM

If only it were true! hugs dear poet!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/5/2024 5:05:00 AM

I love the hope within your vision of a world without war...how I yearn for a balanced world--one without the ego driven need for power, greed, etc., that's exemplified in acts of war

Karen Jones
Date: 3/5/2024 5:15:00 AM

Wouldn’t it be nice to have? Thanks