A World Unknown

Roaming through the woods
Looking around the trees

Stopping for one second
I realize I am free

As I begin to walk again
I hear a faint call

Following the voice
That leads me through the forest

The call gets louder and louder
A shadow gets closer and closer

I reach the shadow which is a girl
Come with me and we will explore the world...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pettit Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Did you find this girl in The Twilight Zone? This is an easy to read presentation that conveys decent descriptiveness.
Palli Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 12:14 PM
nice one
Delacroix Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 10:52 PM
Nice write. Oftentimes we have to go through the forest to find our dream. Hope you've found yours. Well written narrative. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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