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A World Unknown

Roaming through the woods Looking around the trees Stopping for one second I realize I am free As I begin to walk again I hear a faint call Following the voice That leads me through the forest The call gets louder and louder A shadow gets closer and closer I reach the shadow which is a girl Come with me and we will explore the world...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/13/2011 8:19:00 PM
Did you find this girl in The Twilight Zone? This is an easy to read presentation that conveys decent descriptiveness.
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Date: 2/21/2010 12:14:00 PM
nice one
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Date: 2/10/2010 10:52:00 PM
Nice write. Oftentimes we have to go through the forest to find our dream. Hope you've found yours. Well written narrative. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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