A World That's Not Real

can I turn off my computer

shut down my phone

turn off the lights

and open the blinds?

No

Because I look outside
and I see everyone pass by

Looking at their phones
Smiling at a text
Ending a phone call
Playing a game as they wait for a bus

And I think to myself

I wonder if there’s a message
Waiting for me
But I missed it when I turned off my phone

I wonder if
Someone is trying to call me
I wonder if you miss me yet
and reached out to say hello

I wonder if I jumped the gun

Maybe the break from that world
The one that strains my eyes
Till I can’t see without 
Five hundred dollar glasses

The one that numbs my brain
and I can’t write without
Missing that red line to help me
Spell the words I want to speak

It was all too soon
But will it ever not be?

I look out my window
and I see the world
For what it’s become

I see how people have changed

How they depend on a device
So small
So delicate

So important

I close the blinds
I go back to where
I put it away

I turn on my computer
and wait for my phone to
Let me in

But nothing is there
No one is there

They are all too busy
In a world that’s not
Real
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 11/6/2016 10:02:00 PM
They are all too busy In a world that’s not Real.. Personalized conversations are nearly abandoned....... Congrats for being featured....
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Date: 10/27/2016 10:40:00 AM
Amy M., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/26/2016 12:00:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Amy. :)
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