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A World of No Roar

Words, how I adore !
holder of thoughts and much more
when worn out, a bore !
One sublime world of no roar
dive into and grasp its lore.

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FJ Thomas

January 22, 2021 at 2:07 PM

I'm very much agree Besma :) Very nice!

Besma Riabi Dziri

February 24, 2021 at 2:43 AM

Thank you so much for the honour of your visit and your beauty of soul! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.

Winged Warrior

September 9, 2019 at 8:09 AM

Short and to the point...enjoyed my dear Besma...be blessed...^WW^ :o)

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 10, 2019 at 6:12 PM

You honour my humble work, Winged Warrior.. so much obliged to you for your visit and sincere encouragement.. my warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

September 8, 2019 at 1:15 PM

Words and thoughts when worn out are an absolute bore for they have no meaning, no oomph! Clever write from my clever friend and soul sister - I love it and have faved it and will remember to always dive into a sublime world of no roar and grasp it's lore! Hugs dear Besma, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 10, 2019 at 6:10 PM

I always receive your sincere words with utmost pleasure and gratitude, dearest Jenny.. I am very blessed to have you as a soul sister whose humility and generosity I highly value and cherish.. thank you so much.. love and hugs.

Robert Lindley

September 6, 2019 at 5:43 AM

Very deep and inspirational creation my great friend. Superb rhyming and a true delight to read this short piece. An art to deliver so much in such brevity, You have wonderfully succeeded and then some.... A pleasure to read this fine morn. A fav...

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 10, 2019 at 6:08 PM

And a great pleasure to read such wonderful feedback from a great poet, Robert! Honoured and greatly pleased by your generosity and support.. thank you so much for being here to read and reward my humble work.. My warmest regards and blessings.

Michael Whatley

September 5, 2019 at 10:50 AM

Here you have captured a topic that I've never seen written out - the creative exploration for a new perfect word to capture your thoughts. Well done, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 6, 2019 at 3:43 AM

Thank you heaps for such a wonderful feedback, Michael! So glad you enjoyed my humble work and pleased it reached your soul.. My best regards and blessings.

Maria Williams

September 5, 2019 at 12:14 AM

Dearest Besma, even though a Tanka consists of only 5 lines, your words hold such depth that they deliver a 1000. A poem to think on, now you've got me thinking of that 'one'sublime word with no roar, in hushed quietude I shall ponder. A Gem and a fave of a Tanka....Maria Hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 6, 2019 at 3:39 AM

Sweet friend, I am truly blessed by your generosity and kindness .. you are of a humility to follow and uplift my very humble poetry.. Your great support is rewarding.. You spread your light on the path of poetry and encourage souls to dare! Deeply grateful to you.. Stay always blessed dearest Maria.. Love and hugs.

Paul Callus

September 4, 2019 at 5:42 AM

Short but very expressive, Besma. You have a way with words, and rhyme gives them an added flavour. Sometimes words need a rest while we savour welcoming moments of silence. ~ Warm regards & Blessings // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 4, 2019 at 4:50 PM

When words accomplish their mission, the language of silence reigns for a deeper connection and understanding. I'm so glad, Paul, you connected with the world of no roar.. thank you so much for your insightful feedback.. I'm deeply honoured and grateful.. My warmest regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham

September 3, 2019 at 2:54 PM

Sometimes we have to rest then go in a little deeper and it will flow. Interesting write Besma. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 4, 2019 at 4:27 PM

I thank you from the depth of my heart, Tom, for your continuous support to my humble poetry.. it means a lot to me.. I highly value your profound thoughts and appreciative words.. Best regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

September 3, 2019 at 12:50 PM

Holder of thoughts and much more..that is an apt description for what flows out of a mind of a writer. You executed the rhymes well and delivered your message..well written, poem, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri

September 4, 2019 at 4:22 PM

So much obliged to you, dear Vijay, for your great support and uplifting encouragement.. your sincere appreciation elevates my humble work.. thank you so much.. my warmest regards and blessings.

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