Slight Buckling Poet Shape

A World In Words

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cloudscloudscloudsclouds                                   cloudscloudscloudscloudsclouds       
           cloud                                                             cloud                 cloud

   
                                                     plane                                                  


                                                                                               bird            
                                                                        birdsbirdsbirds                                     
    helicopter
                          top                                                              
                     exec.office
                   management                                                                 
                      workers                                                                         kite
                      workers                                                          leaves
                      workers                                                         tree
                      workers                         home                       tree        
                     cafeteria      car              heart         flowers     tree   picnic
grassgrassgrassconcretepavementgrassfoundationgrassgrassgrassstumpgrassgrassgrass
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                                                        Hell

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Yoni Dvorkis December 26, 2009 at 4:54 PM I'm with L'Nass, this is probably one of the most original works I've read on PS and it's stunning visually. Also, I need to know what's in that 'treasure'. it's right under the subject's home so I'm gonna guess he buried it there, right below his heart:) cool write. Thanks for sharing.

L'Nass Shango December 17, 2009 at 6:32 AM It is the imagery of all our chaos in the solidity of our sterile reality ... it is art that enunciates what creativity is always about. It is one heck of a poem. Well done.

Florentina Laic December 13, 2009 at 9:35 AM Interesting, original approach! Love, Florentina

Doris Culverhouse December 11, 2009 at 1:55 PM funny, I like it!! yet so prophetic!