A World In My Hands

She looked down into her hands resting on the table. 
There lay the  remnants of her life.
The scars and pains of another time.
The mark the cut made on her palm
from the baby food tin when she was thirty.
Her bitten nails torn and ragged.
She smiled at the little pains and pleasure there.

Hints of psoriasis on the backs of her hands. 
The worry of  that, all that, all her life. 
The first diagnosis when she was seven.
The pain and shame of it as a girl and woman.
Oh how she used to cover herself.
How she wanted to be beautiful for him. 

She looked deeply at her hands
and could not see the tears that had fallen there.
Tears for her lost baby.
Tears for the worry and fears of a good life.

He came into the room
and walking by he touched her.
Never a word said as he went to another room,
she raised her head and watched him,
smiling deeply at his back.
She was happy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 15, 2014 at 9:31 PM
PADDI, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
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January 3, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Paddi, , congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
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January 3, 2014 at 3:53 PM
you did this from the heart, paddi.. cheers to you for a win in my contest!.. huggs
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January 2, 2014 at 2:04 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, PADDY. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
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January 2, 2014 at 12:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Paddy
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December 29, 2013 at 5:07 PM
hi, paddi.. please include your name, contest title, date of poem , and visual number to qualify.. thanks.. SOUP MAIL
Campi Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 2:07 PM
A very nice poem. Sometimes true love is silent. Thanks forposting your work.
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December 23, 2013 at 11:43 PM
Hello Paddi, a very nice ending. With happiness, what more could one ask for... xox~ Linda
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December 23, 2013 at 10:57 PM
A beautiful write here Paddy, great imagery of passing years. Blessings Carl
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December 20, 2013 at 3:46 AM
- A really good poem for the contest, Paddi - Wish you luck! - My last is also for this contest. - Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me - and thank you for all your kind comments on my poems. - Wish you and everyone you love a pleasant Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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