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A World Gone Dark

mom is comatose tubes hooked up on life support words float above you they do not sink in there is no registration desk for the likes of them on your own now a world gone dark

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Date: 2/26/2021 1:09:00 AM
So sadly true in many lives.
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Date: 2/24/2021 4:10:00 PM
Hi Gershon, This is such a well-written poem on a sensitive subject. I have of a lot of stories that said people in a coma can hear their loved ones. I believe they can. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/24/2021 11:15:00 AM
Oooo! This is a really good one Gershon. I have heard it said that people in a coma sometimes know what's going one they just can't respond; but they have waking and sleeping just like normal. It would be awful scary to be stuck like that. Well done here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/24/2021 6:17:00 PM
It seems that even the dead man knows what's goin on around him! Scary stuff, Judy! ~ Zombie Man

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