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Death ... Death is NOT the enemy It is but the longest part of eternity The essential part that gives life its preciousness and value It is the body's rest, the spirit's release, and the soul's freedom When we again join tenderly with the Universe ... coalesce with the cosmos. Apathy ... Apathy is TRULY the enemy It is the thief of all that's good and estimable Its complacent dynamism will rob you of all you feel and find of value It is the lie of substances - the voice they whisper you, sweet That life is for THEIR purpose alone - the endless pursuit of euphoria. Escape ... Apathy's true and wily ambition The artful, errant ambition it has perfected Escape from worry, escape from stress, escape from pain and pity But in truth, escape from love and emotion and responsibility ... and LIFE An escape that is permanent, impervious and cold. Death ... Death can come to you in many ways And it can come long, long before you breathe your last For substances - the great lie - will strip your passions, for good and gone Even if you are released from the grip of their addictions and affects Your heart will never thrum - never MOVE - with the sacred intensity it did. Poet ... I am a poet, among other things I do my best to write honestly, with unusual phrasing and imagery Melding fresh word pairings and ideas with classic style ... and emotion Imagine what I could write - the Sonnets and Odes and Verses and Rhymes If I wasn't cursed by my own poor choices, to never feel DEEPLY ... again. Fool ... oh, fool!

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Date: 8/13/2019 5:44:00 AM
Gregory..you are one of the best poets here! Your poem is proof it is so!)) Panagiota
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:36:00 PM
Oh, thank you so very kindly, Panagiota, I so appreciate the kind words - blessings to you, friend! :o) <3

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