A Wonderous Fate

Birthed through Mother's most wondrous state
into the arms of love and fate
to so rejoice to be sensate,
O God has opened Heaven's gate. 

I grew in loves mysteries
found my husband and grew to see
such majesty within my mate,
O God has opened Heaven's gate. 

My husband gave to me a son
and through the gate, he too did come.
Child grew to man and met his mate,
O God has opened Heaven's gate. 

I'll not begrudge or be ingrate
or ask for more, a child's dictate,
I am content to live sensate
O God has opened Heaven's gate.


*life is heaven if you choice to see it as such.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/30/2012 5:58:00 PM
Debbie; This is just beautiful. When God opens the gate. Thanks for sharing this with us today. Lucilla
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Date: 5/28/2012 12:15:00 PM
I agree that heaven can be on earth if you choose to see it as such. We fail to enjoy what is in front of us. Excellent. love phyl
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Date: 5/25/2012 8:20:00 PM
'Life can be a heaven if you choice to see it as such' and you have justified this beautiful concept in your lovely and beautiful write Debbie. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Debbie G.
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Date: 5/25/2012 7:30:00 PM
Debbie; this very beautifully written. thanks for sharing. many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 5/25/2012 5:35:00 PM
Ohhh, cute! I love it. Love it when Heaven's gate is open. Good write, Debbie. Just think what else God will give to us! Love, Toquyen
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